2. A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch
I think the feedback I received was very important to me because it made me realize that I was too broad with my market. Both peers that reviewed my previous pitch agreed that I should really point out that I am aiming to make this a college friendly product and the first of its kind.
3. What did you change, based on the feedback?
Based on the feedback, like I said earlier, I focused my pitch around the aspect of the app being dorm friendly. I also tried a different camera angel to get a better look at my stance and professionalism.
Hey Kevin,
ReplyDeleteI really liked both your pitch and your idea. I believe you and I lived in the same dorm last year, so I know that there is definitely a demand for the service described. I appreciate how you considered the feedback given to you and modified your pitch and approach accordingly. Best of luck with the further progression of the endeavor.
If you’re interested, here’s a link to my elevator pitch: http://madiganent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html#comments
Dear Kevin,
ReplyDeletePretty cool. I started to get into cooking a couple of years ago and really had a tough time in the beginning. Your app would have made it so much easier and given me a lot of encouragement. I really think you are on to something. It's also great to see how you incorporated the feedback from previous comments. Keep it up! Take a look at my elevator pitch 3 at http://taleemreflections.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-3.html. Thanks.
Farrukh
Kevin!
ReplyDeleteIt is great to know that thanks to the feedback received you were able to realize your market was too broad, and be able to fix it. Also, the camera angle was Ok, I was able to follow your pitch very smooth. Keep it up! I really liked your venture idea, and how helpful will be to students! feel free to check out my post http://cabuawad.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no3.html