2. A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch:
I really liked to hear back from my fellow students about what they thought of my idea. All the feedback that I received was positive but also reassured myself that this idea has a marketplace here at the University of Florida. All three of my comments said that they all agree that going to the grocery store is a hassle but they are still willing to cook, I even had one person suggest to add wine to this delivery service. (What a great idea!)
3. What did you change, based on the feedback?
Like stated earlier, the feedback that I recieved was all positive and did not urge me to change anything. However, in order to not repeat the same video, I added some detail and tried to make the video look more professional.
Kevin,
ReplyDeleteI think the concept of creating some sort of service that delivers both cooking and instructions and ingredients is a great idea. The only thing is I am pretty sure there is a company that has essentially the same concept and already exists. I think an area where you could differentiate yourself is potentially designing it specifically for college students and dorm delivery. Another suggestion is to create a name for your product and include it in your presentation. If you get a chance here is the link to my video. https://www.blogger.com/blogger.g?blogID=8729527358278987898#editor/target=post;postID=428961761234873394;onPublishedMenu=posts;onClosedMenu=posts;postNum=2;src=postname
Hey Kevin, I really liked your idea and the way you delivered it. It was very professional and could positively impact a lot of college students. I agree with the previous comment in that I think there is already something similar in the market. If you focus mainly on college students or a target audience you could make your service unique to them and that would differentiate your service from others. Here is the link to my blog, feel free to check it out
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